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I went on a field trip with my ________(随便写一个人）on Sunday. We went to East Lake, it was beautifle. We went there by bike which made us exhausted. After we arrived in the late morning, we decided to go to the zoo first. There were many animals, but the bad thing was it smelled. We then went on a boat and started eating the food that we brought with us. We tool adundant pictures during the trip. I was too tired to go to school on Monday but I was glad that I had the opportunity to go on this trip!

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